高中英语满分作文写作技巧:三段式作文法
来源:长理培训发布时间:2020-07-18 17:11:51
重点诠释:
所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言,如何把握较大的写作空间,三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常为:
1. 第一段开门见山,提出要解决的问题或观点,或者把时间,地点,人物和主要事件及时点出。
2. 第二段要摆出事实或提出论据,或者把事情发展的经过详细写出来。
3. 最后一段,得出结论或理由。
注意:要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。
常用的过渡词有:
递进型: also, (and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only …but also等;
解释型:that is (to say), in other words, or,namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;
转折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等;
列举型:firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等
举例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等;
因果型:because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so… that, so that等;
让步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
顺序型:first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等;
并列型:and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等
时间型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly…when, no sooner…than 等
总结型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
见解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等
条件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等
从写作方法来说,考生可以根据高考议论文写作的一般思路将整个文章分为三段来写。
第一段是引言段,引出两点:topic和thesis。Topic就是文章的话题,在这篇文章中就是集体舞比赛这个事情。而thesis就是指全文的中心内容,在本文中就是自己是否参加比赛。注意英语写作需要开门见山地引出主题。有些考生到全文结尾的时候才表明自己参加或不参加的态度就是不对的,必须在开头就表明自己是否参加这个比赛,然后再论述理由。
例如在例文中,A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.或者Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.都是用来引出topic的句子。而引出thesis的句子则是While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.或者But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
第二段是论证段,也是全文的重心所在,主要是讲述自己的理由,即为什么参加或者不参加这个比赛。一般来说,对于一篇120-150words的文章来说,只要写两个理由就够了,每个理由之后都有一个进一步的细节阐述,这样整体的字数就差不多达标了。例如,在论述自己参加比赛的原因时,范文中写了两点:1.可以放松自己;2.可以展示自己的舞蹈水平并为班级做贡献。每个观点又都有自己的支撑句,例如对于“放松自己”的支撑句就是用一个谚语来引出relaxation的重要性。而对于“展示自己的才华”,支撑句是自己学舞蹈学了五年以上并且舞蹈技艺很好。第一个分论点的论证方式是先提出总的观点,再进行论证,是演绎法的推理。第二个分论点的论证方式是先有理由,再有观点,是归纳法的推理。
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