解放军文职招聘考试情景作文

 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

    注意：词数不少于60

    提示词：郊区 suburbs

    第二节 开放作文（15分）

    请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

    第一节 情景作文（20分）

    一、内容要点：

    1、骑车去植树

    2、植树

    3、安插提示牌

    4、照相

    二、说明：

    内容要点可用不同方式表达

    【参考范文】

    Green Action in Our Class

    April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

    【解析】

    本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。题材贴近学生实际，学生只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。

    【专家简评】

    在全国卷和地方卷中，08年只有北京卷是记叙文，09年又是记叙文。有趣的是，都是“红星中学高三一班的学生李华”。场景设置几无二致，形式更是何其相似乃尔。如果追索源头的话，全国卷NMET时代的连环画看图说故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年书面表达题跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格连环画的形式，多少让人回到了九十年代。一个是红星农场，一个却是红星中学。就话题而言，08北京是春游活动，09北京是植树主题，而NMET1998则是参观活动主题，话题显然高度相关。