解放军文职招聘考试英语作文专家解析

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 

    1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 

    2.位置：天安门广场南面； 

    3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 

    4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 

    参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 

    当当车 trolley car 

    地铁 subway 

    注意： 

    1.词数100左右； 

    2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 

    3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

    【参考范文】

    Dear Sarah,

    Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it. 

    Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you‘ll like it.

    【解析】 

    本文是书信格式，给出四个要点，属于常规文体，学生只要把四个要点写全，注意上下文，句与句之间的合理过渡即可。

    【专家简评】

    人物李华，简单的外事活动。体裁属于陈述说明性质。话题是介绍前门大街改建情况。但这个话题对全国卷II考区的考生多少有些歧视。这种歧视可以理解为城乡歧视和信息歧视。因为该考区学生对前门并不熟悉，所幸试题控制很严，只当是翻译了。另外，试题所提供的名词类词汇缺乏考试的实际意义，只是照抄而已，对考生并无挑战。