回顾历年12月四级作文名师改卷感悟及针对建议
1. 大家拿到作文题目之后,先要仔细阅读题目明确作文的类型。这一点是非常关键的因为四级相对很强调作文的结构。如果没有一个很清楚的结构,一定会失去一定的分数。四级作文一般有下面三种结构:说明文,议论文和应用文写作。说明文主要可以分为阐述主题类型的,利弊类型的,原因结果类型的,解决问题类型的以及谚语说明类型。议论文主要是就观点进行反驳类型的。应用文写作主要包括演讲词,求职求学信,邀请信,感谢信和投诉信等。所以大家必须在平时复习的过程明确各种类型的写作结构,这样在考试时候就可以在结构上不会出现任何问题,也不会因为写跑题而失分。 来源:www.yeeyi.net
2. 开始写作文时一定要段落清楚,有明显的开头,主体和结论部分。也就是大家要学会分段落,不要象记流水帐一样,一段到底,这样就会给老师留下很坏的印象。同时在文章写作过程中,一定要学会使用一些句子之间以及引起和结束文章时候的连接词,这样的话可以使文章很自然,流畅。比如在写文章主体的时候可以用首先,其次,再次这样的连接词,或者一方面,另一方面,等这样的词。这些都是很容易引起老师的注意,可以得分的地方。
3. 写文章时候尽量多用一些四级词汇,这样也可以提高老师的印象。但不是说你用的词很多,而写出的句子结构,语法错误太多。这样也会很糟糕的。因此大家一定要注意,如果自己词汇不怎么多的时候,你不要用自己不明确和不会拼写的词,还有一定要确保句子的正确性,尽量避免语法结构的错误。即使你使用的简单句,但是写的很清楚,没任何错误,也可以得到不错的分数。
4. 注意文章的长度安排,短的作文一定是不可以的,也就是字数要达到要求。但是长的作文如果几乎每句话都有错误也不能得到好的分数。所以大家一定要注意,写的时候要长度适中,确保写出的句子错误很少,即使观点只是很一般,没什么新的地方。也能得到相对好的分数。 一起呵英语站
5. 卷面一定要整洁,字一定要写的漂亮,这可以在很大程度上影响你们分数的升降。印象分数几乎全部是这个决定的 ,所以大家也要主要平时handwriting的练习。
四六级作文评分标准及错误总结
评分标准
2分……条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)
常见写作错误
一、主语错误
1. 主语缺失
1)In our country feels very free.
People feel free in our country.
2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.
People in my hometown are very busy.
2. 非名词主语
1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
3. 主谓错位
1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.
People can acquire knowledge from books.
2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.
Now people can’t do without TV.
二、谓语错误
1. 多重谓语
1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.
In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. / A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.
2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.
Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.
2. 非动词谓语
1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.
Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.
2)It is said that the place worths touring.
It is said that the place is worth touring.
3. 主谓不一致
1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.
I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.
2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.
I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..
4. 误用词组
1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.
They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.
2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.
I am afraid that it’s going to rain.
三、冠词错误
1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.
In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.
2) They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.
They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.
四、代词错误
1. 偷梁换柱
1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.
An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.
2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.
2. 指代不明
1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.
2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.
五、形容词、副词错误
1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.
What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.
2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.
Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.
六、分词误用
1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
2) Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.
Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.
七、修饰语误置
1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.
Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.
2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
八、垂悬修饰语
1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.
Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.
2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.
To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.
九、平行错误
1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.
While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.
2) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.
Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course. / Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.
十、搭配错误
1) In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.
2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.
Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.
十一、破句
1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.
Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.
2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.
First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.
英语四六级写作经典句型
1)主语从句
It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.
It is well-known that…
It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…
It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that…
It is / thatwww.yeeyi.NET
2)宾(表)语从句
We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.
The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.
3)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…,
There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.
It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.
4)状语从句(时间,原因,地点,条件,让步,转折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him.
Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.
5)分词短语做定语或状语
Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.
6)倒装句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem. Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.
7)被动句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem. He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds. Many people believe that…(It is believed that…
8)设问句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
9)比较
1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
10)原因壹壹英语(www.YeeYi.Net)
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...
5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...
6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...
7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
8. One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
9. Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
10. Perhaps the primary factor is that ...
11. But the fundamental cause is that ...
11)结果
1. It may give rise to a host of problems.
2. The immediate result it produces is ...
3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. Its consequence can be so great that...
12)批驳
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...
13)举例
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ...
3) Such examples might be given easily.
4) ...is often cited as an example.
14)证明
1) No one can deny the fact that ...
2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...
15)开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...
8) According to a recent survey, ...
9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
16)结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(一)
一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Long Holidays. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 长假给大学生带来的好处
2. 长假可能给大学生带来的问题
3. 我应当怎样利用好长假
【四六级范文】我要收藏
Long Holidays
Generally speaking, long holidays are good for us college students. On the one hand, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesses and further develop strengths. On the other hand, we can take part-time jobs, which can make us realize responsibility and make ourselves better prepared for social life.
But every coin has two sides. Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicted to various computer games. I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way.
As far as I am concerned, I will try to make the best use of my precious time. I will spend most of my holidays studying English for that I am very poor at it. In addition, I will take a part-time job as private teacher. By this means, I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well.
二
Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况
2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性
3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活
【四六级范文】
On a Harmonious Dormitory Life
Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory will be disturbed in one way or another.
As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On the one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.
There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends. In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.
三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Silence Is Not Always Gold. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 在现代社会中,“沉默是金”不一定是好事
2. 请举例说明
3. 总结全文
【四六级范文】
Silence Is Not Always Gold
“Silence is gold” is a popular saying in which many people have belief. To these people speaking too much is not a merit. However, if you always keep silent, you will probably miss many golden opportunities instead of obtaining the gold of silence.
Last week I read an article written by an office lady. The company where she worked had two kinds of offices: cubicle office and window office. As a new employee she worked in a cubicle office together with twenty colleagues. Two years later she still worked there but some colleagues who came later than her had moved into the window office. She felt confused. One day one colleague told her that window office wasn’t obtained without request. But believing that she certainly gained one if she did a good job the woman had never asked for it.
From the woman’s experience we learn that silence is not always gold. In the modern society one needs to speak his mind and speak for his own interests.
四
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Renew Knowledge. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 更新知识的重要性
2. 怎样更新知识
3. 你自己的感受
【四六级范文】
Trying to Renew Knowledge
Today’s society is of knowledge economy age, in which new knowledge emerges much faster than ever before. Moreover, knowledge plays an important part in the whole economy. Therefore, everyone finds it necessary to renew his (or her) knowledge, otherwise he (or her) will be left behind the society.
There are some ways to update knowledge. On the one hand, one can attend different courses at all types of schools, either part-time or full-time. On the other hand, self-study is, in a sense, a more convenient and practical method by which one can effectively renew his (or her) knowledge.
In my view, I have primarily depended on self-taught method in the recent years. Although I am busy doing daily work, I still insist on teaching myself at night. In this way, I can not only keep up with the swift development of society but also apply new knowledge to my practical work, which benefits me a lot.
五
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Western Fast Food. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 洋快餐颇受中国消费者的青睐
2. 产生这种现象的原因
3. 我的看法
【四六级范文】
Western Fast Food
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. Today, nothing is more representative of the fast pace of modern society than fast food.
There are several reasons for its popularity. For one thing, it is fast and convenient. Go into a fast food restaurant, and your food will be ready in a minute. Precious time won’t be wasted in waiting-in-line to order or waiting at your table for your food to arrive. For another, its popularity is also attributed to the clean food, the excellent service and the comfortable environment of the fast food restaurants, and American style.
However, I think that fast food isn’t healthy enough because it doesn’t compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and we should turn to it only once in a while.
六、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 大学生越来越重视参与社会实践
2. 社会实践对大学生学习和生活的影响
3. 如何正确看待社会实践 我要收藏
【四六级范文】
Social Practice
Social practice is a bridge between their theory and reality. So, in recent years, more and more college students choose to take part-time jobs in or outside school.
In the social practice, students are sure to learn more than their textbooks. Their participation in social practice might strengthen their sense of social responsibility. Their close contact with the working people might help them to apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problem. But many teachers complain that there are fewer and fewer students who pay attention to their study.
In my view, it’s an undenied fact that students break the balance between their jobs and studies, especially when they fall into conflict. But I think students should spend their spare time taking part-time jobs. Timely participation in social practice will benefit them all through their life.
七、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因
2.分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因(可从失业、压力过重、缺少支持、缺乏人际交往能力等方面加以分析)
3.你认为人们应如何保持心理健康
【四六级范文】
How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
One in four people will experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of a year. When you fail to manage these problems, they are likely to cause various mental illnesses.
The causes of mental health problems often vary a lot from one case to another. In today’s society, a good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure. Others lack communication skills. In addition, a lot of people are ignorant of psychological knowledge about how to keep mentally fit.
There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. Firstly, find the real cause of your mental health problem and see whether you can do something to make a change. Secondly, learn to relax yourself and take exercise to release the pressure. Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk to your partner or friend about your problem, or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant.
八、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Aid Education in China. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
Aid Education in China
1. 支教的现象
2. 支教的意义
3. 你的观点
【四六级范文】
Aid Education in China
There has been a hot topic recently about college students’ being encouraged to help children in the poor and remote areas.
Generally aid-education is helpful in two aspects. First of all, it can broaden volunteers’ horizons in poverty-stricken regions. For instance, it is a golden opportunity for volunteers to experience a completely different life. In addition, college students have to adapt themselves to the harsh living conditions, meanwhile they can make friends with the children.
In my view, the future of China’s education depends on the joint efforts of the society, the government and all the citizens. To sum up, we college students should take the initiative in response to the appeal for supplying help to children in poor regions.
九、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Selecting Courses. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 选修课程在大学很普遍
2. 解释其中的原因
3. 你的看法
【四六级范文】
Selecting Courses
Recently, people in growing numbers show their concern about selecting courses. In some colleges, students are permitted to pick out their course’s professors freely. The reasons are listed as follows:
In the first place, students can choose the teacher according to their interests, which will be helpful for their future careers. Besides, selecting courses can reduce the rate of students’ absence indirectly for students usually choose their favorite teachers.
As far as I am concerned, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, students may learn the course better, because they may choose the professor they liked. On the other hand, if the professor who is very popular and a great number of students would like to attend his/her course, the classroom must be overcrowded. It will have a bad impact on the class.
十、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是Tony,是英语一班二年级学生,因有事不能上外教Ms. Riddle 的课,给她写一张请假条,说明你不能来上课的原因。
【四六级范文】
October 8, 2007
Dear Ms. Riddle,
I would like to know if I could ask for a casual leave of absence from your Oral English class this Thursday morning.
Yesterday afternoon I got a phone call from my cousin, who is now operating a small company in suburbs of this city. He needs an interpreter for two days but cannot find the most trustworthy person, so he wants me to make an attempt. It seems to me that this is a golden opportunity to put what I have learned in your class into practice, but I need your permission of absence. If you think I may go and help him overcome the difficulty, I am confident that I’ll do a good job and both of us will be thankful.
Earnestly yours,
Tony
2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(三)
一、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Intelligence- Nature or Nurture? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有人认为智力是天生的我要收藏
2. 也有人认为智力是环境决定的
3. 如何更好地发展智力
【四六级范文】
Intelligence-Nature or Nurture?
Nowadays, there is no agreement among people concerning intelligence. Some people contend that intelligence is to some extent something we are born with. And the closer the blood relationship between two people, the closer they are likely to be in intelligence.
However, others maintain that environment plays a crucial role in our intelligence. For instance, if we put two identical twins in different environments, we might send one to university and the other to a factory where the job is boring, we would find differences in their intelligence several years later.
Just as every coin has two sides, our intelligence is partly born and partly developed. The sure way to develop our intelligence is intelligent parents as well as a good environment.
二、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parents Are the Best Teachers. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 父母是最好的老师
2. 解释其中的原因
3. 重申观点
【四六级范文】
Parents Are the Best Teachers
It is your parents who teach you to walk; it is your parents who teach you to speak; it is your parents who teach you to do these basic things in your life. Thus parents should be the best teachers!
First of all, parents know us more than others do. Parents give us life, and I consider that we will spend plenty of time with them. Therefore, they learn about our merit and shortcomings clearly. At the same time, they will help us to shake off our demerit. Besides, parents own much more life experience than us. Sometimes, they are just like our models. And as the saying goes: “Example is better than precept.” Thus we will unconsciously imitate some of our parents’ habits and styles of behavior, which means that we can learn good things from them.
Just as the saying goes: “There is no place like home.” And I think there is no teacher like our parents. They are the best teachers in our life.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Shopping Center in the Neighborhood. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
据称,在你所在社区内将建一个大型购物中心。你同意还是反对这个计划?为什么?请说出具体的理由。
【四六级范文】
A Shopping Center in the Neighborhood
Although large shopping centers are very convenient and good places to spend free time, they can also bring some disadvantages, and for this reason I would disagree with the building of one in my neighborhood.
First of all, one disadvantage of having a large shopping center would be a great increase in traffic. More cars would not only bring traffic jams but also noise and parking problems. Second, a large shopping center requires a lot of space. To build one, some open space would have to be sacrificed. We might no longer have room for a sports ground.
Just because of the above disadvantages, I would oppose any plan to construct a large shopping center in my neighborhood. Although it is necessary for me to visit shopping centers on occasion, I could spend some time traveling to another one not far away. My neighborhood is a peaceful and quiet place and I hope it will stay that way.
2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(三)
四、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Arrange Your Time at College? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
对大学生的时间安排有两种不同的看法:有人认为大学生就该整天读书;有人认为参加体育锻炼是大学生生活的一部分?
你的看法?
总结全文
【四六级范文】
How to Arrange Your Time at College?
Nowadays, people are divided on the question how students should arrange their school days. Some people claim students should spend the whole school days in academic studies. However, others contend physical exercise should be a required part of every school day.
As for me, I will choose the latter without hesitation. Being a student, his or her main task is
to work hard on his or her academic study. Only by studying hard can he or she obtain adequate
knowledge from academic studies. Nevertheless, I don’t think a student should focus on studying
too much, he or she should join in other meaningful activities. For instance, doing physical exercise is a good way to make students’ life more colorful and beneficial.
In a word, when students gain knowledge from academic studies, they should not neglect to relax themselves and take regular physical exercise.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Do Libraries Become Useless at the Age of Information? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人认为信息时代不再需要传统图书馆了,因为…
2. 有些人认为信息时代传统图书馆仍然有重要作用,因为…
3. 你的看法…
【四六级范文】
Do Libraries Become Useless at the Age of Information?
There has been a heated discussion about libraries at the age of information among people. Some people, especially the younger generation, challenge the value of conventional libraries. When they need any information in their studies or work, they can turn to their computers for help. For this reason, they do not need to go to a library for borrowing or returning one or two books.
While others, including most old people as well as scholars, value libraries. They love libraries because they can enjoy peace and quietness in an isolated spiritual world. And they also have access to rare academic works needed for their studies in the libraries.
In my view, conventional libraries are still available though there is still much room for improving. At the Age of Information, as long as knowledge is respected and cherished, libraries won’t extinct from our lives. On the other hand, libraries should not refuse the latest information technology, which will enable them to regain those young readers.
2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(四)
一、
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Cell Phones. You should write at least 150 words and based on the following gragh and the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 描述上图所示的手机用户变化情况(据统计,2007年上半年手机用户量超过5亿)
2. 出现这种情况的原因
3. 对此现象做出评价
【四六级范文】
Cell Phones
As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming more and more popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 24,480,000, but in 2002, the number is more than 100 million, which is a turning point. The newest statistic shows that in 2007 the number has exceeded 500 million.
There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of a cell phone. ?
The wide use of cell phones has made them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.
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Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Cell Phones. You should write at least 150 words and based on the following gragh and the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 描述上图所示的手机用户变化情况(据统计,2007年上半年手机用户量超过5亿)
2. 出现这种情况的原因
3. 对此现象做出评价
【四六级范文】
Cell Phones
As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming more and more popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 24,480,000, but in 2002, the number is more than 100 million, which is a turning point. The newest statistic shows that in 2007 the number has exceeded 500 million.
There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of a cell phone. ?
The wide use of cell phones has made them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Sub-health? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 随着现代化的不断加速发展,全世界的物质生活水平不断攀升,但人们却日益受到“亚健康”这种不良状态的威胁
2. 亚健康的具体表现及在我国的蔓延程度(据调查,北京 75%、上海72%、广州70%的上班族都处于亚健康状态)
3. 在现代社会中应怎样解决亚健康问题
【四六级范文】
How to Deal with Sub-health
With the modernization of the world, people’s standard of living has improved a lot. Then there appears a state of sub-health among people which poses a new threat to them.
There are some typical symptoms for people who are in a state of sub-health. First of all, those who suffer from it often have a headache or backache. Secondly, they feel like having a rest frequently. What upsets us most is that, the situation is spreading countrywide. As a result, more and more workers in big cities are harassed by it, with a percentage of 75 in Beijing, 72 in Shanghai and 70 in Guangzhou respectively.
Then how can we solve this problem effectively? Experts suggest that the best way to keep ourselves healthy is to do exercises. It is also very important that people should form a good living habit, for example, getting up early and going to sleep early. Only doing so can we keep us healthy.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Job-searching Experience. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 介绍得到这次求职信息的途径
2. 叙述这次求职经历的全过程
3. 谈谈你对这次经历的感受或体会
【四六级范文】
A Job-searching Experience
Last Friday my English teacher told me that one of her friends was looking for an English governess. I asked for her friend’s name and phone number. I determined to seize the chance and have my first job.
I was a little nervous when I went to the woman’s house. I was told that the talk between us that day would decide whether I could take the job. However, when the woman, Lucy as she was called, welcomed me into her house, I felt much relaxed. I thought as long as I was sincere and friendly I would perform well. The conversation went on smoothly. She seemed much more interested in my habits and hobbies than how good I was at English. It happened that we have the same hobby: playing tennis. I told her about my family and school life. Obviously I succeeded and from then on I went to teach her English every weekend.
Lucy told me later that it was my sincerity that made her willingly accept me. It is true that we can play some tricks while seeking for a job, but remember to be sincere. It’s the secret of my success.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled My Opinion on Campus Love. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.有人认为校园恋爱的影响不好
2.有人却认为校园恋爱没有什么不好
3.你的观点
【四六级范文】
My Opinion on Campus Love
On campus, lovers can be found here and there. Some people think too much intimacy has a bad influence. It takes lovers too much time and energy. Furthermore, their intimacy can distract their own as well as other students’ attention from study. Campus should be a place for study and should maintain an atmosphere of learning.
On the other hand, other people believe it is OK. Pursuing love is all right to students on campus and intimacy is a natural expression of love. Some scholars of law hold that friendship and appropriate intimacy are an important part of student development.
In my opinion, what all people should do is just leave it as it is. University students are adults, and they can handle their own affairs well enough. However, they have to admit that school is a place where people receive an education and their main task is to study. Therefore, students are expected to behave themselves in proper ways.
2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(五)
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Do We Need “Never give up”? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. “永不言弃”一直被认为是一种积极的生活态度,是个人成功的关键因素
2. 但是,也有人认为适当的放弃才是明智的选择
3. 你对此的看法及理由
【四六级范文】 来源:壹壹英语
Do We Need “Never give up”?
It is widely accepted that “Never give up”, a strong and positive life attitude, is the key for individual success on the grounds that permanent persistence may boost our confidence, strengthen our will, and provide us a second chance for success when we are in hardship. However, others argue that sensible abandonment is more precious than blind persistence because the wise one should choose the most suitable area for himself/herself.
In my opinion, we need to learn to give up timely. The most immediate reason is that we should adjust our aim carefully in order to go ahead continuously. Sometimes, to give up those unrealistic targets is essential for success. Besides, the attitude “Never give up” exhausts us both mentally and physically. Only through learning to give up can we lead a pleasant and relaxing life. Finally, the temporary comprise means a new start, a beginning bringing new hopes, expectations and opportunities for us.
Passive as giving up sounds alike, it represents a more mature and realistic mentality. If those opposing this attitude can take into consideration of its benefits, then this may seem acceptable in our lives.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 住房问题在大城市变得越来越严峻
2. 住房问题产生原因及给城市带来的影响
3. 建议一个解决办法(如:多造高层建筑;向地下发展;建造卫星城市;疏散城市人口等)
【四六级范文】
How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities?
With the development of modern industry, more and more people are flowing into big cities. Accordingly, the housing problem in big cities is becoming much more serious. People in the big city are complaining housing shortage and roaring price of the housing.
As we know, the temptation and opportunities provided by big cities attract people who want to make a fortune in big cities, which is the major cause of housing problem in big cities. Besides, house vacancy and speculating in the housing market are becoming the tough problem. We can’t deny the housing problem has brought about great pressure to the low-income families. Meanwhile, solving this problem will affect the public’s confidence on the government.
To solve this problem, I think building satellite cities in the suburbs is more practical. The fresh air and beautiful scenery in the suburbs will pull many people from the overcrowded city and alleviate the pressure of housing.
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Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜
这种现象造成的危害
我们应该怎么做
【四六级范文】
How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas?
There has been a serious epidemic of fake diplomas in some big cities recently. Usually a certificate of Bachelor’s Degree costs about 200 yuan, which is really cheap compared with the 4 years of hard work and the pretty big sum of fees involved in normal ways of getting the diploma.
The victims of fake diplomas are first of all employers, who pay high salaries but do not get real talents. People who have genuine diplomas are also hurt greatly. They have honestly spent 4 or even more years and great energy working hard in schools, but cannot get any advantage in job hunting.
To combat the epidemic, practical ability and individual personality should be recognized as important factors of excellent job performance. Besides, effective measures supported by advanced IT technology should be introduced and taken to help employers distinguish genuine diplomas from fake ones.
四、
谈谈你对选秀节目的看法 On TV Show
时下电视选秀节目非常流行
有人认为选秀很好,能给普通人展示自己的机会
我的观点
【四六级范文】
On TV Show
TV has been one medium of communication that has connected millions. And it is this link that makes talent hunt shows on the tube amazingly influential. Young faces conveying disappointment or even overwhelming joy have become a common sight on as many channels as your remote allows you to surf.
Some people have their opinions on the TV shows. The advantages of the shows are clear to some people. For one thing, in terms of business, the increasing popularity of talent shows has helped the channels in generating huge income by way of advertising and promotions. For another thing, the TV shows can make the common people have opportunity to show themselves.
Personally, I side with the former opinion. It is a wonderful feeling and a great way to relax for me to watch talent shows and see ordinary people like myself become famous and win cash prizes. As long as talent shows are entertaining and inspiring us, there is great sense in keeping and encouraging them.
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A Letter of Advice
假设你是一名大四学生,即将毕业离校,请你根据四年的大学生活的经历给大一新生写一封忠告信:
1. 作简单介绍
2. 大一新生如何适应大学生活
3. 强调学习英语的重要性
【四六级范文】
A Letter of Advice
Dear Freshmen,
I, the undersigned, am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Peking University. I would like to say a few words to you, which I hope would be helpful to you.
To begin with, the change of ideas is of most importance for freshmen to adapt themselves to campus life. During the middle school days, we usually depend upon our teachers at school and parents at home. However, the life and study on university campus features independence, which is essential to our psychological development. In my view, we had better always bear in mind the idea of independence.
What’s more, English learning is a must. On one hand, without CET 4 certificate, we can not get our degree when we graduate from university. On the other hand, when we hunt for job, English level is a deciding factor. Therefore, I do hope that all of you will have a good understanding of the necessity of learning English well.
Good Luck to you!
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
2009年6月英语四六级考试考前必看范文(六)
一、
Internet Harmony
1.随着社会和经济发展,网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具
2.但是,在网络上也出现了一些不和谐的因素,如垃圾信息,黄色网站,虚假新闻,网络炒作等 壹壹英语考试www.yeeYi.net
3.如何采取措施制止和消除这些现象
【四六级范文】
Internet Harmony
The advent of the Internet ushered in a new era of interpersonal communications and business operations. Undoubtedly, the Net are revolutionizing the daily lives of the people who have an access to it. The primary reason behind the Internet boom roots in its multifunction.
A range of problems lurking behind the frenzy of Internet impressively stand out. A vast majority of Internet users’ mail boxes are saturated with junk mails, an issue which sparks strong criticism and generates the loss of corporate productivity. Porn websites lure a growing number of young people’s visits. False news via the e-mail, BBS and chat room increasingly poses a threat to the social prosperity and stability.
To crack down them, we should push for a more effectively tough law. We should join our forces to launch a nation-wide campaign, including imposing stiff penalties on spammers, shutting down or blocking the lewd sites and introducing a real-name registration system to curb fraudulent messages. We can fully believe that our combined efforts will reap rewards. A clean cyberspace will paint our lives more colorfully.
二、
Living on-campus or off-campus?
1. 分别阐述住校的好处和在外租房的好处
2. 你对在校住和在外租房的看法
【四六级范文】
Living on-campus or off-campus?
Living on-campus makes it easier to get oriented to the way things are done. Plus, you interact more with other students. Keeping up with studies in your first year is hard enough. You should not have to worry about finding your way around and figuring out the university bureaucracy. Living in the dormitory also make a student feel more a part of the university community. There are more opportunities for you to involve in university activities and networking with students and university administration.
Living off-campus, however, is a definite advantage for older students. Finding an apartment, dealing with leases and the landlord’s regulations, cooking meals, and figuring out budgets are all good practice for life after graduation. Off-campus housing also gives students a better perspective on what is going on around them. Campus can be like little worlds. Getting to know neighbors who are not students is good for students coming from difference places.
I think it is better for college students to live on campus during their first two years, and then move into an apartment for off-campus life, while juniors and seniors need the independence of off-campus life.
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on Green Olympics,You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestions given bellow in Chinese;
1. 现在社会上有很多环境污染和精神污染的现象,提出你对“绿色奥运”的看法。
2. 为什么要提倡“绿色奥运”。
3. 提倡绿色奥运,从自己做起。
【四六级范文】
Green Olympics
Olympic Games, as we all know, is a historic sports meeting. “Green Olympics”, is one of the three themes of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. At present, people’s life is being flooded with exhaust gas from automobile, blue film, waste water and so on. Owing to these phenomena, we should advocate “Green Olympics”, and I am positive of this point.
Two possible reasons are as follows. Firstly, environmental protection benefits people’s health. In terms of increasing number of trashes around us, such as white plastic bags, one-off cups and chopsticks, it is sensible of disposing of them reasonably. So we ought to use clean technology, renewable and recyclable materials. Secondly, environmental protection is crucial to our country, and even to the world. Lots of countries attached more attention to embrace the Olympic spirits—“higher, faster, and stronger”.
In conclusion, as college students and the young generation, we should try our best to advocate “Green Olympics”. The 2008 Olympic Games will be a green and unique Olympics.
四、
Should grad student be paid higher than non-grads?
1. 大学生目前存在错误心理“大学生应比非大学生挣钱多”
给出大学生会有这种错误的心理的原因
从非大学生的发展状况来批判大学生这种错误的心理
【四六级范文】
Should grad students be paid higher than non-grads?
In our country, it is obvious now that the university graduates earn more money than non-graduates. I quite agree with those graduates who have paid a lot for their studies and expect to make more for either himself or his family.
However, it is not so optimistically for those who hope to make it. The critical career competition makes them frustrated due to many factors involved. One of the utmost factors is that they feel what they anticipate is not matching up with what they have found in reality. Many university graduates are not satisfied with what they get for what they have done. As a matter of fact, some of them expect so unrealistic that they immediately lose the credit to the workforce they belong to.
On the contrary, some of the non-grads who are more realistic in career hunting tend to get more satisfied job compared with graduates. Thus what really matters here in salary balance is how one can contribute to the organization rather than what background they hold. The tuition is really high in China. Many high quality students due to this have lost their academic pursuit. Any responsible government should inevitably take this burden and put more money in order to bring up better next generation for the nation.
五、
Students’ Rating of Their Teachers
学生给老师打分已很普遍
人们对其持不同态度
我的看法
【四六级范文】
Students’ Rating of Their Teachers
Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.
This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system. They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes everyday, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials used are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues.
I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they themselves have leaned in a course, and to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his relationship with students, and his ability to arouse interest in the subject.
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