解放军文职招聘考试感谢信

 13．（感谢信）

Directions: Write a letter of thanks according to the following situation. Once you were ill and were hospitalized for a few weeks in the Chaoyang Medical Center, Taiyuan, Shanxi Province. During your stay the entire staff were kind to you. When you came back home, you wrote them a letter of thanks.

Write your letter in no less than 150 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address.

June 23, 2007

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to extend my heartfelt thanks to all the nurses and doctors in your hospital.

Last month, while I was on a business trip in Taiyuan, Shanxi province, I suffered from a bad cold and a fever, so I was sent to Ward Rom 201, Chaoyang Medical Center. During my stay at hospital, nurses on duty patiently took my temperature, regularly examined my body, and often fed meals to me. In addition, doctors prescribed me the most effective drugs and gave the best medical advice. Thanks to the constant care from the hospital staff, I recovered quickly. Now that I have returned home, the excellent service of your hospital still impresses me. I believe that as patient, I have received the most professional treatment and the most considerate care.

Please allow me to convey my sincere greetings toward the doctors and nurses that contribute all their efforts, patience and energy to their patients. Nothing can express my gratitude except my best wishes to them. If you have anything that needs my help, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

(一)原因1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.

A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for) the phenomenon (problem).                                                        2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.                                    3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...                                      4.The factors that contribute to this situation include...                         5.The change in ...largely results from the fact that...             6.We may blame ...,but the real causes are...　                                     7.Part of the explanations for it is that ...

One of the most common factors (causes .is that ...

Another contributing factor (cause .is ...

Perhaps the primary factor is that …

But the fundamental cause is that

(二)比较 　　

1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.                    2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.                3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...  4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...                                                         5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.　　6.Like anything else, it has its faults.                                  7.A and B has several points in common.                                         8.A bears some resemblances to B.                                           9.However, the same is not applicable to B.                                      10.A and B differ in several ways.                                           11.Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.                             12.People used to think ..., but things are different now.                          13.The same is true of B.                                                      14.Wondering as A is, it has its drawbacks.                                        15.It is true that A ..., but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...

(三)批驳

1.It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.　　   2.There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.                                                 3.Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.                         4.Many of us have been under the illusion that...                                5.A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.　  6.It makes no sense to argue for ...                                          7.Too much stress placed on ...may lead to ...                                       8.Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...                        9.Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...

(四)后果

1.It may give rise to a host of problems.                           2.The immediate result it produces is ...                                      3.It will exercise a profound influence upon...                        4.Its consequence can be so great that...

(五)举例

1.A good case in point is ...                                                   2.As an illustration, we may take ...                                                3.Such examples might be given easily.                                                 4....is often cited as an example.

(六)证明

1.No one can deny the fact that ...                                 2.The idea is hardly supported by facts.                            3.Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...                4.Recent studies indicate that ...                                            5.There is sufficient evidence to show that ...                               6.According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...

(七)开篇

1.Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...          2.Recently the problem has been brought into focus.             3.Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.                    4.Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...                5.Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...                                  6.Never in our history has the idea that ...been so popular.               7.Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...                     8.According to a recent survey, ...                                  9.With the rapid development of ..., ...

(八)结尾

1.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2.It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...          3.It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...                      4.In conclusion, it is imperative that ...                                      5.There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.                             6.To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...                                         7.In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.                                                            8.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.                                                                       9.We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...                                                                10.Taking all these into account, we ...                                    11.Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...

 

一． 上升增长

1．…add up to… 增加了eg. The total amount of … added up to 14 billion pounds(14%) in 1994.                                                   2． to jump to / to soar to…… 一跃达到/ 猛增到…

eg. The total working days lost soared to 10 million in 1979.

　　3．…an increase of about…percent as compared with…… 与…相比大约增加了…

　　eg. In August as many as 39 car accidents were reported, indicating an increase of about 79% as compared with the number of January.

　　4．…to experience an increase/incline …有了增长

　　eg. Tobacco consumption is experiencing an incline.

　　二． 下降，减少

　　1．…to sink/drop/reduce to… 减少到…

　　eg. The rate of strikes sank/dropped to the lowest point in 1979.

　　2．…to experience a decrease/decline …有了减少

　　eg. Tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease. 注意：

　　修饰上升/减少的副词有：

　　rapidly slowly dramatically respectively 表达上升/减少的最后状态的词有：

　　the highest peak the lowest point 10 million 10%

　　三． 起伏

　　1．…to go up and down …起伏不定

　　eg. The strike rate went up and down during the period from 1952 to 1967.

　　2．There be ups and downs …有起有伏

　　eg. Between 1972 and 1979, there were several ups and downs in （某方面）.

　　四． 稳定

　　1．…to remain steady/level/unchanged …保持稳定，几乎不变

　　eg. The rate of …remained steady (fairly level/almost unchanged) during the four years from 1963 to 1967.

　　2．…to level off (vi.)

　　eg. After a steady decline for a whole decade, the …rate shows signs of leveling off.

　　注意：

　　修饰起伏或稳定状态的副词有：

　　almost fairly 可以用于表达起伏，稳定状态的句子中的词组或句型：

　　the general situation was not worsening

　　show indications of improvement

　　it can be predicted that…

　　eg. The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,and it can be predicted that the general situation was not worsening.

　　eg. The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,showing signs of improvement in …

　　五． 成正比，反比

　　1．…be in direct /inverse ratio to/with 与…成正比/反比

　　eg. Male illustrations are in direct ratio to /with the advancement of grades, while female illustrations are in inverse ratio.

　　六． 占百分之几，几分之几

　　1….to form/comprise/make up/constitute ….percent …占百分之…

　　eg. Women comprise more than 50% of the U.S. population.

　　eg. Females make up only 24% of the illustrations whereas males constitute 76%.

　　2．…to form/comprise/constitute a half/third/fourth of……占…的1/2,1/3,1/4

　　eg. Female illustrions form less than a fourth of the total.

　　3．…account for…percent 占百分之几

　　eg. ……, accounting for approximately 20 percent of…

　　七． 倍数

　　1．A be …times as much/many as B

　　eg. The annual rainfall of Hunan is 5 times as much as that of Sichuan.

　　2．A doubles/is half/triples B A是B的两倍，一半，三倍

　　eg. The annual rainfall of Jidda doubles that of Janta, but is only half the amount of rain Kuwait receives each year.

　　附一 圆盘比例型图表 例： 一个圆盘显示了大学生在food, books, transportations, entertainment, clothes, unknown中的开销，它们各自占的比例依次是60%,3%,5%,10%,10%,12%，要求你描叙这个圆盘图。

　　描述:

　　The above pie chart consists of 6 segments, the largest one representing food, which accounts for 60% of the total. Clothes and entertainment each takes up 10%. 5% goes to transportation and 3% books. All the rest expenses, 12% of all ,is spend on unknown items.

　　总结写作模式：

　　…pie chart consists of…segments, the largest one representing…,which accounts for …of the total.…each takes up….…goes to….All the rest…, …of all,……. .

　　八.原因结果

　　1….(结果)…, owing to (原因) [owing to 为分词结构]

　　2….(结果)…, attributable to（原因） [attributable to为形容词短语]

　　3….(结果) lie in the fact that（原因） [ 同位语从句 ]

　　4….（结果）result from（原因） [句型一般]

　　5. It is precisely because （原因）…that （导致结果）… [强调结构]

　　6. …, as a result, …（导致结果）… [as a result做插入语]

　　7. （原因）be responsible for（结果） [常见句型]

　　8. （原因），which in turn（结果）

　　eg. They give rise to unfair competition, which in turn throws original businesses into a commercial panic.

　　九．采取措施，提出建议

　　1. My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows. In the first place,…. Secondly,…. Finally,… [常见句型]

　　2. If we let the situation go as it is, …. By that time, …. 如果让这种情况继续发展下去，那么……。

　　到那个时候，……。[比较好的句型]

　　3. More and more people are realizing the importance of…[进行时态， more and more比many好]

　　4. Great efforts/More measures/Due attention must be taken/paid to do …[ 被动语态，due attention 和be paid to 搭配]

　　5. If……, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果（我们怎么怎么做），那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。[条件句，反问句]

　　6. It is important/necessary/urgent/desirable(希望)/advisable(明智) for sb. to do sth. [It is …for …to do…句型]

　　7. enhance the awareness of people that…

　　8. The first nut for us to crack is… 我们首先要解决的是……。 [比The first thing we should do is … 句型 高级的多，精彩的多，生动的多]

　　9. ……as soon as possible [常见句型]

　　10. sth. be of the utmost importance [ be of n. 结构， 比sth. be much important好]

　　十．方式，比较

　　1. (Just) as …, so… 正如… [ 比较句型 ]

　　eg. Just as water is the most important of liquids, so air is the most important of gases.

　　2. in much the same way/manner that… 正如…, 和…一样

　　eg. The Americans spend Christmas Day in much the same way that the Europeans do.

　　十一. 让步

　　1. now that …… 既然…… [让步从句]

　　eg. Now that the decision has been made, we must try our best to carry it out.

　　2. unless…not… [ 让步从句]

　　eg. It is a vicious cycle and unless you consider these social, economic and environmental problems in one context, you are not serious about meeting the challenges. [注意例句中的consider sth. in one context句型:把什么事情放在一起加以综合考虑]

　　十二. 强调句

　　1. only [既是强调句,又是倒装句]

　　eg. Only in this way can you hope to improve the present situation.

　　2. It is …that…

　　eg. It is because he was too careless that he failed in the exam.

　　3. nothing but 只不过；只有…

　　eg. If what we have been striving for is nothing but pleasure-seeking, our nation will be deprived of the right to rise.(这里nothing but 可以去掉,不影响句意,但有了nothing but,就强调了后面的名词)

　　十三. 假设

　　1. Supposing……, it is likely that…. 假设…, 那么很可能… [假设, 虚拟语态]

　　eg. Supposing you wanted to buy a washing machine, it is more than likely you would obtain details regarding performance, price, etc. from an advertisement.

　　十四. 反问

　　1. What else can …? …………还能做什么呢?

　　eg. What else can the poor parents do but obey? 这些可怜的家长除了听从外还能做什么呢?

　　2. How could ……? 怎能….

　　eg. How could I put the English books aside to read pastime books?

　　十五. 比较

　　1. A is to B what X is to Y. A对于B 就象X对于Y

　　eg. Food is to man what oil is to machines.

　　2. ……more…, less…

　　eg. The closer to Christmas, the crazier they get; they become more agitated, less patient.

　　十六. 否定

　　1. 双重否定

　　not uncommon = common 平常的,普通的

　　not unusual = usual 平常的，通常的

　　not inevitable=evitable 可以避免的

　　(尽量把要强调的普通的形容词改成双重否定, 为文章多增加亮点)

　　2. by no means 并没有;当然不

　　3. no longer/more 不再

　　eg. I am no longer that ignorant girl.

　　十七. 程度

　　1. all the more 更加

　　eg. That makes London all the more fascinating, doesn't it?

　　eg. It is all the more surprising therefore that…

　　2. more than 做副词, 意为 "多过…", "比…以上", "比…更"

　　eg. I am more than happy to hear from you.

　　3. more than you can… 远超过你…

　　eg. The situation is very abominable more than you can stand.环境非常恶劣,你无法忍受.

　　十八. 论相互关系

　　1. A have much(nothing) to do with B

　　2. A be closely related to B

　　3.A be directly bound up with B

　　4. a definite link between …and…

　　十九.直陈观点

　　1. more than…can 简直不,无法,难以…

　　eg. The beauty of the city is more than I can describe.

　　2. beyond description 无法描述

　　eg. The beauty of the city is beyond description.

　　3. There is no point(use) in doing… …是没有任何意义的.

　　4. The first nut for us to crack is … 我们首先要解决的问题是…

　　5. short-sighted policy 眼光短浅的政策

　　6. while ……with one hand, ……with the other. 当(我们)一方面…., 而另一方面…

　　eg. While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.

　　7. far from 远离,远远不,非但不

　　eg. Far from taking exception(take exception:反对), no one is even mildly surprised.

　　8. be bound to

　　eg. Any discussion of this topic is bound to question the aims of education.

　　9. (or) vice-versa 反之亦然

　　10. sth. be measured in terms of … sth.用…来衡量

　　eg. "success" is measured in terms of freedom from insecurity.

　　11…. (现象)…, upon which views vary from person to person.

　　12.A be more essential to B. 对B来说, A是尤为关键重要的.

　　13.Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long years. (很优美的句子,值得借鉴)

　　14. from the …point of view 从…角度来看

　　eg. From the health point of view 从健康的角度来看

　　15. ……must be rooted out in order to …. …必须根除以…

　　eg. Moral corruption must be rooted out in order to preserve the integrity of the state. 为了使国家健康发展,必须根除腐败.

　　16. …represent only the tip of the iceberg. …….只是冰山一角

　　eg. The most famous stars represent only the tip of the iceberg.

　　17. The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity. 科技的快速发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的发展一个强劲的推动力(2001年****的七.一讲话).

　　18. ….stand tall and aim far, broaden one's vision and give full play to one's intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of reform, opening-up and the modernization drive. 站的高看的远,开扩自己的视野,在改革开放和现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智(2001年****的七.一讲话). (句中很多的词组都是作文中可以运用到的,比如改革开放:reform (and) opening-up等)

　　19….demonstrate the value of one's life and work hard to achieve feats that will live up to the expectations of the people and the times. 证实自己的人生价值,努力的工作取得成就,而不辜负人民和时代的期望. (出处同上)

　　20.When asked about…, the overwhelming majority of people say that ….But other people think of … as…. / But I think quite differently. (对报刊上某一问题(已有不同的人发表了不同的观点)发表自己的观点)

　　21.It is generally believed/accepted/held that… 通常认为….

　　22 It is no denying the fact that…. 无可否认…

　　23……… , so…that…

　　eg. The river is very clear, so clear that you can see the fishes coming and going in it.

　　eg. Everything is covered with a thick layer of dust, so poisonous that all the grass, trees, vegetables and flowers gradually die.