论文写作指导：大学英语专业学生在英语议论文写作中出现的问题及对策

 对于英语专业的学生而言，听、说、读、写、译是最基本的五项技能。写作相对于其他技能来说是最重要也是最薄弱的环节，它是学生英语语言知识水平的综合体现，体现了学习者思维和语言的综合能力。写作题材包括了记叙与描述（Narration & Description），说明文（Exposition），议论文与说服（Argumentation & Persuasion）。接下来，笔者将就英语专业学生在以Campus Love为主题的一篇议论文写作中出现的问题进行探讨，并分析其对策。
　　一、学生在议论文中出现的主要问题
　　（一）观点不突出。
　　在这次写作中，学生需要以Campus Love为主题写一篇议论文表明自己是支持还是反对的观点，有的学生是皆可：On one hand，its existence has its own rationality; on the other hand，this kind of attachment is also risky.这其中的原因应该是对议论文的写作不熟悉，老师必须强调学生要有鲜明的论点，才能在后面的论证中更有说服力。
　　（二）句子冗长。
　　同样在这篇议论文中，有的同学没有遵循简洁明了的原则，出现了许多冗长累赘的句子，例如：
　　1.With the development of science and technology，more and more people have a tendency to make acquaintance with strangers through the internet and even fall in love with those cyber lovers.
　　2.Is it wise to fall in love with someone you have never met in person·
　　3.Cyber lover's style is not the king you like desperately，but the tragedy is that you can't find this only through communication on the Internet.
　　4.It has been a common practice for college ss to find thEir boyfriend or girlfriend on campus.
　　5.Fall love with in college have become a common phenomenon for college ss.
　　6.They just take advantage of it to kill time.
　　7.Besides，campus love can bring about many psychological problems for campus students.As is known，frustration met with in campus love has been a leading cause of the increasing tragic events，such as suicides，murders，violent actions.
　　8.For ss who concentrate on campus love，would affect their academic study more or less.
　　9.So only through long association can we have a deep understanding of a person.
　　10.They will spend time on having meals together，going out together and even studying together in order to develop their relationship.
　　11.We have seen many soap operas or read many love stories，in which the heroes and heroines fall in love with each other the instance they meet each other.
　　（三）主谓语不一致。
　　1.Many bad guys，they take advantage of the internet to occupy someone's love.It is not to protect someone they have never met in person，but to get money or others things from the "cyber love"，and even destroy her/his life.
　　2.When met with holiday，they even need to prepare valuable gifts to express their love.Shopping，dining out or entertainment，any of them all need money.